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07-03-2006, 01:47 PM
It's called a dangling modifier, for the grammar cops. (I teach grammar, but intentionally break the rules when I write sales copy. Shhh... my students don't know I break the rules I teach them. But they for darn sure are shocked that I generate hundreds of thousands of dollars for my clients with words. The question, "Why do I need to learn this anyways, I'll never use this in the real world" never comes up anymore.)
A big no no, when writing a term paper.
But, people speak "broken english" like this all the time. So the question becomes, "Will it effect sales?"
I'd say the answer is in the market you're trying to sell to. And the image you're trying to pass off in your sales copy. |