Hey all,

Please review my new sales letter at www.VisionGatePortal.com/kbax

1. What improvements would you recommend in the sales message itself?

2. What changes would you make in the overall layout of the letter?

3. Are the bonuses compelling? If no, what would you change?

4. The headline... Does it grab your attention and force you to keep reading?

5. Does the sales letter justify the price?

Thank you for your time,
Keith

Kevin your page is down or URL incorrect.

Thank you Alan, the period at the end of 'kbax' has been removed.

Keith