However, is the shema you use to write your sales letter, however it is older or newer never have a break.

Make the stream continous.

Make it fluant an nonstop letter, a well maded one, with many triggers as you can, but never make a break..

Never let them be waiting for the rest.

Never let them to think about the bill that they have to pay, never let them amused by their childs, keep them in between your hand, try to make their reading pleasant, but never never never never never (make a break)(Ps: it sound like I have nothing else to say), perhaps but I wil not make this break that you are waiting for, if they get a break in your letter they will have the oppportunity to think about other stuff else then your product, make it short,continous, and intense.


Thanks.

Ps: help me to be less affirmatif then I am.

Abdellah,

I understand the point you are making -- the idea you are trying to convey.

Are you asking for my feedback? Are you trying to ask us a question? Or are you just making a statement that this is something you believe works well?

Bailey

ofcourse, i will be happy to know more about what you think about.

i made for my glory , no im kidding.

this what i think, but i want to no more,about copy<riting, and im too tiered as a consummer to see these too long sales letters.

ps: thanks for your replay.