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- Save My Marriage Please!
- My New Look Ezine... Opinions
- How did I do?
- One of My Latest Salesletters
- Need Critique On My Brand New Website
- 3% conversion not enough(web copy) ideas on improvement?
- PLEASE CRITIQUE: Totally Redesigned Sales Page
- Would like critique on tweaked site
- A Couple of New Copy Projects
- Critique Requested
- Critique Requested
- Introductions and Question for you all
- Kick My Ass Michel!
- This is killing me... (sales letter critique)
- Seminar page critique ... plus audio testimonials work !
- Sales page critique
- hmmm...shall I cry?
- What would you change in this copy?
- Sales Letter Critique/Free Gift
- Comments on Michel Fortin's copy for my site
- Need Critique On Sales Copy Of Brand-New Website
- May I have a critique please
- How to be in control of your birth - critique required
- My 1st Sales Letter.... Advice please?
- 3 Breathtaking new critique comments needed - helpful tips?
- New copy: Are you desperate for money?
- What do you think about this piece of copy?
- Can I have your opinion on this ...
- Copywriting for streaming Video promo clips...
- Would You Buy This Product?
- Home page click thrus
- What About This One?
- Testing a Page Against My Usual Page.
- Headline Contest...
- Freestanding Pennysaver Insert Needs a Kick!
- What do you think of this copy?
- Radio show clip on front page...
- Please Critique My Sales Letter
- I need help with my website.
- Another HypnoBirthing critique required
- Perfect copy. - No, you say?
- Here's Another I just Wrote/Designed...
- Don't hold back...
- Need critique volunteer: a one-product sales site
- Brand new Trading site redesign -- Hybrid type - comments?
- Copy for a Stop-Smoking product - What do you think?
- Please take the web site makeover quiz!
- Arghh! This is selling well...
- Seminar graphic header -- feedback?
- Website critique, please :-)
- Headline critique
- Video testimonials -- how to improve?
- Here's my latest one...
- Copywriter in training.Need advice frm PROS. "SOS!"
- WARNING: "Internet Marketing" related sales letter
- SamuraiSeminar.com critique request...
- Tried a different approach with this one ..
- My latest -- Desktop Messenger
- New product for the web, using a multi page format
- How would you improve this?
- Little, tiny sales letter just posted
- The Wholesale Drop Shippers Vault
- Just started out...
- Very short letter to promote teleseminar (and CD)
- Alright everyone *teeth clenched* let me av it!
- Re: Wedding Day Nightmare
- Could you critique this opening?
- RE: Some pretty bad copy..
- Can I sell to women with this copy?
- Help To improve conversion.
- My first attempt at copywriting...Tell me what you think
- Need critique for my 'Number One In Your Niche' sales letter
- CV website
- copy feedback welcome
- This copy hasn't yet taken "flight"...
- Honest critique please...
- www.WritingAdwords.com DVD Copywriting course critique?
- Help Please! Pro-Bono Fundraising Print Letter
- Critique on 2 different copy
- could you help me pls?
- Sales Letter for Page Creation Tool
- Critique of a salesletter for my first infoproduct
- Is your domain name safe?
- Please suggest improvements
- My new site is live... offer your advice please.
- misspelledkeywords.com
- I wrote it, but know it could be better -adwordgenerator.com
- Hi Guys, Can you feedback on my Interview Secrets Course.
- Subscription Website Copywriting
- New Age Piano Lessons?
- Can you shoot holes in this copy?
- Please Review the copy for My 1st SITE ...THANKS
- To all copywriting Jedis: Advice needed on my new site copy
- Please Critique me - First Software ready to go
- 7 Video testimonials - feedback?
- Internet-Based Moms Are a HUGE Untapped Market...
- This is my first effort at copywriting. What do you think?
- A Critique Please. Badly Needs One ... Or Two, Three, Four.
- Please critique my new site copy?
- A critique request from a reformed "lurker"
- "Health Product" critique please ...
- Help save a 154-year-old jewelry company...
- Can you please Critique this aimed at Television?
- Looking for Slogan Critique
- Opinions on salesletter rewrite
- 7-DVD "Traders' Secrets" - critique/feedback?
- First-time poster (long-time lurker) needs sales copy help.
- Total Newbie - Please be easy with me :)
- A "Secret Weopen" for Top Flight copywriters?
- Newbe's article about computer security, ask for a feed-back
- For Immediate Release - Wanna do a press release critique?
- Request to Critique My Press Release
- How To Play Guitar In 2 Weeks Or Less...
- I need critique for the letter of a lifetime!
- plz give me..................
- What do you think?
- New Sales Letter Site...
- Gain Lightning-Fast Muscle Mass WITHOUT Steroids...
- New approach to selling webhosting
- Copy Layout
- New SalesLetter - What Do You Think?
- Hello! I'm new here and really need your help!
- John Lennon's Death Critique of Ad Copy Please
- Converting people who didin't want to be on my site
- Want to critique Marc Goldman?
- Need feedback on my salescopy
- "CRACK YOUR NECK OFF!" COPYWRITING STYLE V DANGERO
- Rock Solid ~ Sales Freak Zoid ~
- New Salesletter, Need opinions Please...
- How does my page look now?
- Critique: American Princess who Saved Lewis and Clark
- Why Hasn't Your Doctor Told You About This?
- Are You A Marketing Genius?
- Humbly ask for critique please
- Critique Request - Testimonial
- please critque my website
- I need honest opinions on my copy... thanks
- Hasty Tasty First Draft
- Do You Make These Mistakes ?
- Alright Pls just WHACK me with your first impressions
- I would really appreciate some constructive critisism!
- New Sales Letter Critique
- Critique for copywriting site
- Update: Private Park Membership Letter
- CV/Resume website critique
- Critique for GuyGetsGirl.com Please
- Kindly Requesting Critique :-)
- Copywriting Titans Wanted-Very Hard Critique Only 2 lines!
- copywriter's self promotion letter - a series
- Press release critique
- Please Review this for me
- headline critique
- Do not hold back, hit this with every strength you have!
- Please give me your honest opinion
- Please offer up a critique
- Case Study- Need help before I can go forward
- Will you critique short health web site?
- Copy of a newbie. Comments please.
- Website crique requested.
- Salesletter Critique Requested
- Website critique requested
- Please look at this page, and let those educated brains work
- Getting traffic but no sales - Need sales copy help.
- Need Advice about my site www.grasshoppercorp.com
- My Newest Flat Fee Copywriting Letter
- Making hazelnut spread sound enticing?
- Respectfully request review for emf-health.com
- Headline Suggestions For Brochure
- Update on my "Shared profits" deal and a critique
- Comments pls guys? I think you'll all find this interesting
- Sales Letter
- "How Are My Headlines?"
- Interactive Sales Letter
- Need Advice about my sale letter
- New Member -Needs opinion on Does Dog Have to get Slippers?
- Which Headline Do You Think Is Better??
- Look me over and tell me the truth!
- Article Critique
- Martial Arts Webpage-Critique Please!
- Greetings everyone
- Don't read anything until you've critiqued this website copy
- Sales letter and website critique please
- New Website Critique Request ...
- Copywriters Board... Intimidating to clients or not?
- New Dating Site Critique Please
- Crook Turns Angry Prophet - your critique?
- Headline Suggestion...Jane?
- Please critque this letter for some exam books . . .
- Letter to the audience -- 3x as many as expected showed up!!
- 500 Lovemaking Tips & Secrets - please have a look...
- UK critque request
- anyone wanna gimme feedback on my new sales letter?
- Review of www.DiseaseFreeLiving.com
- I'm New Here, I've Fallen...And I Can't Get Up.
- Child IQ Site Critique - Help a Newbie
- IM BACK! With something NEW and improved!
- This murder site is killing me!
- Sales letter critique, need your opinion please
- MegaSeminar.com copy video critique?
- Newbie asks for an honest critique of ASK campaign
- Could Someone Have A Look At This Site Please
- G'head, hit me
- Can you see anything wrong with this site?
- Need some experienced eyes for a direct-response piece ...
- The Cleaning Tips...Needs Cleaning Up!!
- Transcriptionist selling Transcription Services
- Looking For Ideas To Increase Response Rate Of My Flyer
- Read ASAP -- Deadline is fast approaching!
- A book about chicken houses... need help with the copy!
- Gutter Gunk? What do you think?
- What's Your Dream Car?
- Ebook copy ... did I strike gold or will they go unsold?
- Hi, this is my first ever post here
- Ready...Aim...
- What copywriting rules did I break? How can it be better?
- New 11 minute "Netfomercial" copy: Watch Stacy now
- My sales copy needs tuning - brand new site
- Copywriting Website Critique
- Critique for home page
- MegaSeminar.com new homepage critique?
- Referred from Warriors - Critique my first Sales Letter
- Ohhhhhh....What Can I do, Need A Critique Or I'll Surely Die
- New Affiliate Site - Critique Greatly Appreciated
- My first sales letter... critique please....
- At Last! Scientists Discover New Way To Eliminate...
- Which headline would you use?
- Copy Press Release Critique
- Used Car Sales Letter
- Sales Letter Rewrite: Should I be worried yet?
- First Sales Letter in new Language
- New sex guide for men. Please critique site and sales letter
- Results and Tweaks on Mosquito Sales Letter...
- ADHD Sales Letter Site Critique Request
- Quiz: Video Trading Coaching Salesletter -- How to Tighten?
- Critique Request - Beginning Bodybuilding
- "Networkaholics" Need Your Help
- Please critique--Letter for thehiddenroad.com..my 1st letter
- My first sales letter - Post Mortem Required
- Introduction:
- Takeaway Selling for seminar pitch -- does this fly ok?
- Does this copy build trust?
- How you guys do it
- Landing Page for Book Summary Service - Critique Appreciated
- Da Vinci Code Site - Please Help Critique
- Top Secret MegaSeminar.com Video script copy critique?
- Need Help with Resell Rights Letter
- Is the girl in the Red Bikini in this video too much?
- New Website ready for Review
- Urgent Critique needed - just a few days till it goes live.
- Critque this blurb text