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- My First Webcopy
- EBay rewrite proposition
- Getting Started-Where To Find Work
- This Dead Man’s Wisdom Could Earn You An Extra $100,000.00 In 2007
- Pitching hard and fast, with long copy SELLS.
- Free job hunting e-book for your help with my site
- Desperate for suggestions
- Hotselling guide needs good salespage
- website Critique
- I am 'open' to suggestions and welcome feedback
- How's this? Comments please....
- Please any comment on my first copy ever?
- Header or no header?
- Help me improve my copy and web design
- $100,000 Launch "Last Chance" email: Read This Now!
- Please tear apart my pre-sell
- pleeeassse help with this brief
- Do the egg-spurts think this is a yolk?
- Please Critique My Bodybuilding Sales Letter
- Please review my first sales letter
- Please critique my FIRST EVER sales letter
- Marketing Brochure Critique
- Somebody dial 9-1-1... 'cause this copy is ON FIRE!
- i need some website help
- I still can't think of a better headline. Can you?
- Window cleaner returns! (gulp)
- I need help polishing this letter Please
- Free Copy Of This Course For Your Critique...
- Bored with my new page...
- My First Time.....
- how do I write a better fundraising letter?
- CheatingSpouseTraps.com needs help
- John Reese's Headline
- You opinion wanted
- How can I make this better?
- Please help with a natural skincare website copy critique.
- Could you give me feedback on a ChiRunning workshop sales letter?
- I Double Dog Dare You
- Are YOU Afraid of Offline Sales Copy?
- A quick headline Critique Please
- Please Honestly critique this salesletter
- Please Tear this to Ribbons!
- Egg on my face? What's wrong with this picture?
- Critique 46 Second Promotional Video For New Product
- Critiqe Please
- How to lose what little dignity you have left
- Ok, round two...please review my sales letter.
- Watch *HOT Copy Hooks* In 2 New Videos Now!
- Can you please review this sales letter and offer any comments
- TRAGIC TITLE: What would you suggest...
- Help needed with advertising campaign
- WANTED: Your thoughts and opinions on this headline
- Help with whether to introduce another topic on my website?
- "I need your help please review this letter!"
- Immoral Restaurant Owners?
- New Starter Looking For Headline Help
- Too close to my own copy to see clearly...
- Desperately need someone to review my salespage
- Window Cleaner enters the arena
- One More Time Please
- Smoking ebook sales page critique plz
- Trash The Sales Copy on a Lawyer's Website!
- Rip it apart please! Offline mortgage broker flyer
- Please critique my free and one time offer salepages
- Copy Critique
- My First Copy, Critique Pretty Please
- I need an experts help! Please w/sugar on top!
- I'm Back! New Site, New Critique Request...
- Copywriting Bomb?
- Could you critique my site please?
- Please help with new Headline
- Is This Worth Reading.
- "Some of you copywriters on this board where wrong!"
- Will this sell?
- Please review my perfect salesletter
- Testing 1-2-3 How to Win in Small Claims Court
- Offline Ad Critique
- I Need Your Opinion
- Teleseminar Call to Action Email: Your Thoughts?
- Instant Site Comments - Critique Please
- Please critique "Pheromone Proof"
- Please help me pick/edit one of the three headlines
- Help With New Headline
- Please Critique the "Instant JV Success System" Copy...
- Headline & Copy Critique Desperately Needed
- Can you critique this pole dancing letter to future brides?
- Can you help me with my copy? Critique Please.
- How To Flaunt Your Copywriting Prowess...
- Please critique 26 year olds 4 month year old muscle building site...
- Sales Copy Critique Request...
- My First Direct Mail EVER ... Need Expert's Help
- Proper Grammer Help
- Help me Sex This Up.... It's Gotta Grab 'Em...
- Sales letter needs a critique - thanks all.
- Help with 2 headlines to choose from please
- Whats Wrong With This Headline?
- First attempt. ANy feedback apreciated please
- Advice on how to approach sales letter for penis enlargement
- My Biggest Product Launch Ever: Critique?
- Help with headline please?
- Please critique my first sales page
- Critique: Updated Salescopy...what can be improved?
- Conflict Management Workshop
- Please critique - "Who Else Wants To Make $29,875.34 In 30 Days... Guaranteed!"
- Critique my long copy please...
- Absolute Newbie Needing Help With Headline
- Another Headline Critique Requested
- Extreme Newbie to web design and writing sales copy - HELP!!!
- Extreme Newbie to web design and writing sales copy - HELP!!!
- Ebook Sales Letter - HELP!!!
- Copywriting what's that! Help needed
- Headline Feedback Needed
- Begging for help again - Yellow Page Ad Critique
- Newbie - Needs Help!
- Critique my poster
- Newbie could use some honest opinions
- Analyse this: 25.7% lead but only 0.65% sales conversion
- "Please Help, Right Now I'm Getting 30.20% Opted In Rate How Can I Improve The Rate?"
- Print Ad: Please Critique
- Which PS is right / wrong
- Copy pulled 11.9% to buyers list... can be better!
- Calling on all copywriters and internet marketers to disect my website...
- 18 yrs. old, first blog/sales letter attempt ever -- critiques?
- Looking for Conversion Specialist
- My Last Request
- My "bullets" stink?
- Please Critique My Air Force Page
- Sorry, you're not gonna have as much fun with this one
- Hey Guys, Help with my squeeze page?
- You guys are gonna have field day with this one!
- Get Organized Fast - New Copy Lead
- Please Critique my first name squeeze page
- Copywriting U New Namesqueeze: Thumbs up or down..?
- Newby asking for CC on sales letter...
- Please Critique New Dream Mover Website Sales Letter
- Website Reveiw, Please!
- critique my Blogging Training Course copy
- Email campaign copy
- Please critique my sales copy for a entertainment software
- Get Organized - Copy Version 3
- Sales Desperation to Salvation: Critique Severely Please
- Would you share your valuable review?
- Product Info Sheet: Please review
- Is This The Greatest Sales Copy In History?
- "Reloaded" Critique - new site launch?
- Need someone to critique my letter
- Critique this!
- Critique and Assistance
- Critique on Optin Page before sales letter
- New Website - Let The Suggestions Begin
- Sales Copy - "Crime Fighting" Pen
- My First Sales Letter To Sell My Ebook
- Please critique "Oprah's Debt Diet"
- Boy Does my Copy Suck Bigtime
- Last Ad Got No Calls... Think this one will pull?
- New copy, help please
- I need to have my copy ripped apart by seasoned copywriter vets...
- Converting Visitors to Leads
- Maxwell Sackheim sales letter question
- Critique A Millionaire Site
- Hey Guys :)
- Sax playing site - url/headline ideas?
- Opinions on copy please
- Headline for website
- My New "About" Page
- JP, here's my press release
- For this I used Makepeace, Vitale, Serling, Bly...
- My Sales Letter - I need all the help I can get!
- Long insulting reply to $6millionpropertyraffle critiquers
- Hair Loss treatment sales letter for website
- Please Help With Salesletter?
- FREE BEER - can it sell ?
- Review my Sales Letter Please :)
- Please Critique My Headline
- Increasing opt-in rate
- Copy 1 or Copy 2
- Critique my 60-second ad spot..
- Why Isn't My Website Converting?
- Please critique my website (especially ladies)
- $6 Million Property Raffle
- Example of KILLER copy?
- Appreciate your feedback...
- Critique Most Appreciated..
- Request a Critique on hot topic in... a surprise business
- 12-Year-Entrepreneur Looking for His First Million
- Please Critque - Pretend You're a...
- Request for Critique - Thanks!
- Different product, different customers - thanks for any help
- Ideas to improve www.WinningAdwords.com ?
- Selling From The Stage; 1 sucked & 1 worked; Comments?
- Am I getting there?
- -The Best of Fortin & Garfinkle-
- Please Give Me Your Hardest Critique Possible - Will Tip
- Is long copy or short copy better for this site?
- WHAT'S YOUR PRICE
- MySpacemoneyinyourpocket copy critique
- Sales Letter Critique
- LOOKING FOR A COPYWRITER...
- Apology To Cartess etc.
- New Oxygen Facial Spa - Pop Singer Madonna's Favorite
- Another Job for a Relative (dad)
- Critique Please. I have no conversion rate
- Can you please critique my site
- Headlines to pick from.....
- Can you gauranteeto make this a money pulling copy 4 $2000?
- Please Critique My Site:)
- You can't rip this one up because its too damn good!
- CRITIQUE CONTEST TO REVEAL #1 COPYWRITER ON BOARD...
- New unique Website - Lots of visiters but not many sales
- Would you present this copy to a client?
- Looking for a cold hard honest critique
- SMS Copywriting
- Please critique my entrepeneur web sales letter
- An entry that didn't get in
- Old Yellowed Pages.
- I made some changes, but still need HELP...
- Membership Barrier Page
- Dentist Rip-Off Report Critique
- A seminar invitation critique
- My Conversion Rate Dumped!
- PLEASE Critique My Restaurant Letter - Thanks!
- Request a Critique
- I need HELP and ADVICE for my new site...
- Finding Advertising Agencies
- Looking for someone to flame up this copy
- Critique For Giving Away Free Information
- Is this good enough to sell gold??
- *Critque Needed*
- constructive feedback please
- Critique for Golf Association Letter
- Looking for a crit
- JP Maroney... asking for a crit?
- HELP! Need advice and feedback on my portfolio.
- A contest put to REST
- Critique Appreciated..
- CALLING ALL THE WOMEN IN THIS FORUM!!
- *Critique Welcome*
- Need advise on this whole site
- Please Critique a Letter Selling a 2-wheeled Contraption...
- please let me know your point of view about this salesletter
- Any great copywriters out there...
- The only thing you need to critique
- Please critique my sales letter to info marketers
- Tried a couple of new things here...
- Newspaper Advert Giving Away Arthritis Cream **New**
- My latest Membership Site copy ...
- You Have To Be Crule To Be Kind... in the right mesure!
- I've been a bad boy -- critique my new S-word headline... :p
- Not Your Normal Furniture Ad..
- My first Newspaper Ad