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- Help me solve my dilemma!
- never have so many said wtf...
- Suggestions for Massage Therapy YP Headline
- Back for another Beating!
- Objective Opinions On This "copy"
- YouTube video critique request...
- How About This One ??
- Yellow Pages Lawyer Headline
- Too much in the sales copy?
- My first sales letter... be brutally honest but please be kind too
- My First attempt at a sales letter
- Which Headline Is Best
- I have an idea for flyers
- Think Outside The Box - Trash my SalesLetter
- Does this have enough UMPH?
- Critique for flyer
- Help with some copy for a flyer please.
- Headline Feedback
- Need your Feedback!! Please tell me what you think!
- Please Critique: Blood Pressure Treatment Machine
- Looking for some feedback...
- Give Mike W. Some Copywriting Help Please?
- Finally done, well i think. Any help will be much appreciated :-)
- Insurance Card For Group Medical Insurance Sales
- Affiliate Conquest Critique Wanted
- Critique My Second Sales Letter - Don't Held Anything...
- Critique the crap out of Jim
- Still learning but what do you think?
- Short Newspaper Ad Critique
- Please Critique - Invention
- Newbie to the slaughter
- Need Critique Bout My Landing page
- stop / quit smoking immediately
- Any Advice Before I Hire Someone To do It Properly?
- Major Critique Needed Here...
- My Ideas for a Small Yellow Pages Ad (Pictures included)
- Anyone wants to critique my site?
- is "Meta Magical Marketing" too abstract?
- Professional Sales Letter Needs Your Professional Critique
- Need critique for this draft
- Copywriting "cosmetics" - looking for feedback
- Stuck Between Two 'Touchstones'!
- Is This Gonna' Cut The Mustard?
- First post for a newbie
- ATTN: Anyone who has had success in Weight-loss market--need help!
- Please Critique
- Any advice on my website would be greatly appreciated
- Which Headline is Better.
- Please critique my letters for non-profit
- Please Critique***** Need your Help Conversions
- Copywriting on the Brain- Before & After Critique...
- my first ever sales letter - $397 product - launching soon
- Can you please provide some feedback
- The Most Successful Ad In History...
- please critique my snail mail sales letter offer for a yellows page ad
- Ebay Copywriter NEEDED
- Took Your Advice - Please Dissect Draft #2
- What do Ya Think?
- Opt-In Page Critique- Tear My @$$ to Shreds
- Reckon This Will Pull?
- Squeeze Page & Sales Letter Critique
- Good Names for my Domain
- Anxious to hear a professional's opinion!
- First Post - First SalesLetter - Critique Request
- Critique This New Offer: 10 000 Targeted Prospects, 100 Sales Or I'll Pay You $100
- Narrowing Down Headline to Test
- Sales Page Success.. thanks Michel, Harlan and you folks!
- First attempt - seeking critique
- Sales Page Bombed...Any Suggestions?
- I Want You To Destroy This Sales Letter
- Free Time Management Course For Kick-Butt Critiques
- Will this page pull? Im worried
- Confusion and Chaos Abound--Need Feedback
- I Need Opinions (eye openers)
- Poor Conversion. Please point out trouble spots.
- My 2 salesletters isn't doing well in split-test
- Learning to write copy - need a sales page critique
- A Copywriter Asks For Your Opinion...
- First time Post and a special request.
- What have I done wrong?? Need your feedback!
- Can you work your magic on this one?
- Brochure Moch-up...
- Ideas for this trading seminar Video Salesletter?
- Would you buy this boat?
- *Rip My Site Apart* - Copy Critique Please
- help me figure out that was made wrong PLEASE!
- Would you buy from this page?
- Is There A Doctor In The House?
- How would you convert this traffic to your site?
- Which Subhead Will Work Best For This Online Sales Letter?
- New Guys Asks For Critique.
- Please Critique this Salesletter
- Super-Hot Headline Needs Critiques
- Nitch Marketing
- Why is this sales page is a BUST? Help!
- Sales letter for restaurants - feedback please
- Why Is This Letter Only Pulling 1%?
- Help with landing page
- New CopyWriter: Critique me PLEASE!
- Would you use this phrase in your headline?
- Help !!! New Copy Not Selling
- Please let me know what you think of this sales page
- Please Critique (eBay related product)
- Please Critique Landing Page
- Critique: Product relaunch, non-IM.
- Could You Please Destroy My Sales Page?
- Experts -- give me an assignment!
- Brochure copy. Please critique.
- Name Options Please
- Critique - Any help would really be appreciated please
- Critique of Jobhunters Bible Sales Page
- Total newbie created site and needs review of sales letter please.
- What target market does this hit the most?
- Email I want to send to prospects
- feedback on my spec commercial script ??
- Updated Grocery Guide Cover For Critique
- "This 15 year old CopyCub is READY for a good ol' Beatin' -- Go on, hit me!
- Critique My First SalesPage!
- My First Sales Letter...Please Destroy!
- Please rip my short salesletter to bits
- Critique 'How to mingle' article
- Web copy for graphic design studio please
- Critique my OTO salesletter for a giveaway!
- Pick my spot
- Dating Coach sales letter
- How to play tennis sales letter critique welcomed
- Press Release Critique
- Your opinion is requested!
- Climate Change: Please TEAR THIS APART
- I need a professional critique of this sales page!
- Sales Copy Critique Request Would Be Much Appreciated .
- Feedback on sales letter site
- * Would love a critique *
- What Would You Do To Improve This Cover?
- A New One To Shred... Membership Site Sales Copy
- please review this article of mine!
- OK, Tear Me To Shreds!
- Press Release Critique
- Magazine Subscription Sales Letter Critiquie Needed!
- Two emails - which one is better?
- 2nd Letter After Ted Nicolas Seminar (this product is more ethical)
- Lemme Have It - Plus, Which eCover's Best?
- Writing Services Website - Need Feedback Please
- Communication Secrets of Making People Like You
- Could this be the worst copy ever written by jo han mok?
- Speed Seduction Newsletter
- Critique Request: Newletter site
- First Sales Letter After Ted Nicholas Seminar!
- What do you think?
- Men & women please review SEX salesletter
- How do you post attachments for review?
- Blog post for critique
- What Do You Think Of My Opt-In Page?
- Stress Sales Letter
- Postcard Delirium ll
- Writing copywrite for sunglasses
- Help me sell these copiers
- Critique Request: Seduction sales letter
- Website & Sales Letter for Critique
- Your Advice Needed On Copywriting Website...
- Alternative Health (Lymphatic Drainage)
- Please Check Out My C/W Promo Page
- New Self Help Book Web Copy
- Can you all give some positive criticism on this copy?
- Could I trouble you for some feedback?
- Is this a killer opening for my parenting kit?
- New Critique Please... What Do You Think?
- 'How To Organize' page - revised again!
- Need Suggestions For Getting Orders
- Do I Deserve To
- Need Headline for Legendary Sex Stimulant!
- Copywriting DVD: Double Video Pitch Head
- Sample copy - Comments please
- which believable headline would you use?
- Outsourcing report sales letter - Need review.
- Mr. Subtle's REDOs
- Sweating letter..
- How bad is my first sales copy?
- Critique my Marketing Consultant website
- Brochure Pre Press - Please Review
- my damaging admission
- Butterfly Marketing Sales Squeeze page and OTO
- Please Critique eBook - *Valuable bribes involved*
- Please Critique: Hidden Magazine Ad Secrets Lazy Branding Creatives Are Too Afraid To
- Muscle Building Squeeze Page
- Please Trash This Girls Wholesale Clothing List Website!
- Renewal letter
- Show No Mercy!!!
- Trash my copy PLEASE!
- Been Working on This For 1.5 Years
- Project Management Website - please critique
- Poker Help Site - Critique
- Can someone be honest with me about this...
- Pre-Sell Page Critique Request
- Piano Lessons Site - Please Critique
- What's Wrong With My Page / Offer?
- 1st ever critique request!
- Critique Mail Out Reminder Cards
- Window Cleaning Compnay Website
- I'm scared of this one...please help
- Headline and sales copy critique please
- Wall calendar copy critique
- Time Management copy & Life Direction copy
- Very Poor Conversion - Critique Please
- not so much the copy, but: bad biz move???
- Restaurant Letter Critique
- Critique Window Cleaning Services Mailer
- Headline Critique
- Interview, Instead of salesletter?
- Copy critique, please?
- Website copy critique
- Fantastic product but horrid sales page?
- I'm new to radio copy. Please help.
- New Product Created-Big Conversions-then nothing??
- Push Button Product Review Mini-sites
- sales leads software
- Hi Newbie in Need of Some Help
- The DNA Project
- help w/post card please
- Headline & Opening Critique Please
- Please Suggest Tweaks to Improve Conversion
- Hey Guys this is all over the place I need your help.
- Loan Officer copy
- New here & looking for Critique
- This is not an advertisement...
- Can You Improve On This...?
- Help A Brother Out ... With A Critique!
- Short Story Critque - We're looking to Pay A Savy Copywriter
- Does this hurt your eyes?
- Can you finish this sentence?
- First Video Critique: Do you see salesmanship in that one?
- Do You Think This Will Sell?
- Free Chapter Of My Copywriting Course For Your Critique
- Took forever - but here's my new site
- Day Trading Site: Does It Rock, or Confuse?
- real estate course salespage rough
- How Would You Make This Presentation Better?
- Headline Feedback
- Feedback Please
- Vote On These Headlines
- Please critique this letter (job interview e-book)
- Help me save this email!
- Home Daycare Website Copy Critique Request
- Need Help - Tough Crowd - Golf Executives!
- Great traffic but poor conversion any suggestions.
- Please Critique-Something Is Desperately Wrong With College Bookstores
- This Most Sell! Will it??
- Lead generation sales letter, online safety in South Africa
- Quick feedback on headlines pls
- "Multi-Sensory" Squeeze Page: Rate 1 to 10