| Ideas on re-wording insignificant one-liner... -
09-15-2003, 09:36 PM
Hi again.
This is really NOT that serious ... I just hate using the same
"language" as everyone else in their sales letters, and have
been trying to reword:
"If YOU’VE Been Online for More Than a Few Weeks..."
How in tarnation can I say that without saying it LIKE that?
Any ideas?
I was thinking of something like:
"Unless you're a marketing novice..."
...or something like that. But I don't want to isolate any one
particular part of my target audience. This product will be
useful to the novice to the advanced marketer -- I've made
sure of that -- but it's geared more towards the intermediate
to advanced.
Maybe that'll help some?
Thanks. :-) |