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Default Ideas on re-wording insignificant one-liner... - 09-15-2003, 09:36 PM

Hi again.

This is really NOT that serious ... I just hate using the same
"language" as everyone else in their sales letters, and have
been trying to reword:

"If YOU’VE Been Online for More Than a Few Weeks..."

How in tarnation can I say that without saying it LIKE that?
Any ideas?


I was thinking of something like:

"Unless you're a marketing novice..."


...or something like that. But I don't want to isolate any one
particular part of my target audience. This product will be
useful to the novice to the advanced marketer -- I've made
sure of that -- but it's geared more towards the intermediate
to advanced.

Maybe that'll help some?

Thanks. :-)
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