I think your biggest problem here is that there are already a hundred and 55 thousand products that show people these same things.

So you can polish the copy up all you want, but the 'what you get out of this' is the biggest draw-back.

If this is the best you have to offer (I'm not downing your product--I'm just saying that if you can't put some really unique pitches in your list of benefits) then your best bet is to focus this copy on niches.

Don't tell people how they can make their own websites--tell basket weavers how they can take their sales online.

Of course, I'm not sure how this would tie in with your affiliates. Hopefully, they've all got their own niches and they can adjust the copy accordingly. Otherwise, I think you need to refocus the product on something that has a little more kick to it.