For the 1st testimonial, I do it because I feel it is relevant to the sales letter. That woman (Ninindi) is the one who is selling the stuff.

I am "telling a story" through a 3rd person perspective (Amanda - the storyteller)

For target audience... yeah... I admit, that testimonial is not suitable for my target audience (though, the product can be used for everyone)

You're correct. (Australian market)

And Suzanne, the reason why I keep coming back to get myself getting critiqued is because I really want to be a copywriter.

And you really hit me hard, ya know?