Heh. OK OK.
I just made some changes with the opening sentence. What do you think?
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| Dear reader,
Before we move on, let me clarify one thing. This is NOT about: - Diet Pill
- Phony Device You Need to Wear on Whenever You Travel
- The Magic Pill To Lose Weight Permanently
If you're not looking for any product like I states above, please read on as this will be...
The Most Exciting Message You Will Ever Read!
Why? Because I will explain to you a breakthrough research that will enable you to lose weight without taking too much time... and willpower... and without the help of genetics!
You know, it's not your fault. After all, in today's busy day and age, we can't be expected to have the time, energy, and willpower needed to lose weight and keep it off for good. That's why 95% of all dieters fail to keep the weight off. But there's hope. And I will explain it all in this important message to you.
Let me ask you something: how many products have you tried before you stumbled across this letter?
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