A few questions...
1) where is the traffic going to be coming from?
2) what state of mind are these people in?

you need to tell the story that will resonate with these people, more detail about all of the things you tried on-line, and what they were and why they didn't work, or weren't valuable, while you keep teasing your content as the true answer. You should assume that your audience has likely already heard the Free Advice and you need to empathize with them.

The bullets should be organized around curiosity arousal:

* the three things that should never be in eyesight when you are writing;
* how to accurately determine the absolute best place and time for you to write;
* how to take your writing on the road, without missing a beat;
* how to get in the zone, without allowing your family and kids to distract you;
etc...
not meant to be actual content, just the general idea, these are not particularly provocative...
You should think about giving your method a Name like the Magellan System, or the Sangria Method (I think that is Jason Mofatt's method!), to differentiate.

Worry about the colors and fonts after you have a great message. First though you need to understand your traffic.