Hi Mark,

Just took a quick peep. I would revise your strategy to the following: Squeeze page offering free report or email course followed by your sales letter.

As it stands now, there's nothing very compelling about your sales letter. Sure, everyone wants to get rid of fear and anxiety, but that message is so saturated that most will shrug it off as inconsequential.

But, if you offer something info worthy ... you can get your foot in the door.

My proverbial 2 cents.

-- Rachel