Ok, I need some help.. I read this over and over and think I have a great idea, but it seems to need to be tweaked. Can you all take a look at this and give me your opinion?

I've created a down and dirty page to put the post that you can at least see it before it goes up on the blog... any suggestions would be appreciated.

What's The Cost Of Living Have to Do With Sleep Apnea?

Thanks in advance for the tips...