"If you find this valid feedback." No, Peter. It's crap. A la John Reese. (Meaning it's great!). I'll tell you why... I've been writing 5 "rush jobs" in the last 2 weeks (yup, 5 long copy salesletters in 2 weeks!). So my eyes are getting blurry, I need sleep, and I'm writing copy that may or may not make sense .... Hence the feedback request
