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Default Re: www.WritingAdwords.com DVD Copywriting course critique? - 10-04-2004, 06:47 AM

Hi Ken,

I love your very innovative approach... and congratulations on your new product... you really crank them out! It's no wonder you're so successful.

Peter just posted while I was having some fun with your headline... (you changed it didn't you?)... I don't remember your old headline, but I felt the same as Peter in that it was somewhat subdued compared to much of the rest of your copy...

I winged together a pre-headline, headline, and sub-head idea that I felt went more to the core benefits for your consideration...

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Hope it helps you in some way. Keep up the great work!


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