| Re: www.WritingAdwords.com DVD Copywriting course critique? -
10-03-2004, 07:02 PM
Excellent copy, Ken!
Just one tiny comment. Your first subhead ends with "... like a Coffee-Drinking Internet Marketer!" What is that supposed to mean, exactly? It sounds a little silly to me. IMHO, I think that subhead would be much more powerful if you just dropped those last 6 words.
By the way, I enjoyed the videos quite a bit! It's quick and easy way to learn all about Adwords -- much better than reading an ebook! Great idea! |