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ebizwhiz

Thanks VERY much, Tim!

Excellent suggestions.

I'll start implementing them right away.

I especially love the way you rewrote the section you quoted and your tip about the testimonials.

Will keep those points in mind when I write in future.

Priya

ebizwhiz New Member Posts: 7 Join Date: Mar 2003 Rep Power: 0 Friends: 0	Re: Need critique for my 'Number One In Your Niche' sales le - 09-27-2004, 04:59 AM Thanks VERY much, Tim! Excellent suggestions. I'll start implementing them right away. I especially love the way you rewrote the section you quoted and your tip about the testimonials. Will keep those points in mind when I write in future. Priya Who is Priya Shah?