Excellent numbers!

Way to Go Jack!

Michel,
If you don't mind, I would like to show how much of a difference Jack made in the original copy so "he" gets all the credit!

If I remember correctly, this was my "second" attempt of writing adcopy of any kind, so I still hadn't quite "gotten it" at this point.

Here is a copy of the original

Please keep the laughter down to a low hush!

~~ and yeah, ignore the made up testimonials (I didn't have any to go by).

As I have had the opportunity to use the software, I will say that it Rocks!

Since Jack mentioned his name in the copy, major credit should also go to John Tanner -- the guy working behind the scenes

BTW - To see the actual sales page Jack wrote, you'll need to sign up on the squeeze page ~~~ it's well worth it, Enjoy!