Thanks for the advice again you two. Would you consider making smaller copies inside of a big copy thinking out of the box or is this something fathomable that others have done in the past.

It just seems to me when you see a page that is advertising more than one package with the option to buy them all at a discount rate you generally see copy that is selling the general principle of why you would need all of this. They dont really break it down and focus on why you need this one and then why you need this one and so on.

Skywriteing this is the same package that you checked out in the critique thread I made. I am breaking them up into packages like you suggested. As I mentioned before I have another one like this that is converting at 1.3% with the same kind of traffic (freebie seekers).

BTW these people that see this page have already opted in to my list. The opt in for the page just puts them on an autoresponder acct that keeps feeding them why they need the product.

My list is just another problem I am trying to work with. I have a limited time to work since I am a stay at home dad and need to help take care of kids and chores and such. I am starting to get a decent sized list 1100+ so far. But I dont feed thier heads. I need to quit neglecting the thing that may just bring in the best sales for me.