Ok I have a question. I am kind of thinking out of the box with some copy I am writing for a package I was selling. I wanted to make it completely diffrent and take another approch on it.

I decided to make it somewhat similar to another copy I made that is doing fairly well. The old one is basically a sales copy with 3 diffrent packages in it and an option to buy them all for a reduced rate.

I was told by someone here that I should take the approach of making it a step by step system of some sort. Well I decided to do both and it is starting to become alot of work.

I am not the fastest copy writer and not near being considered near the best. This is starting to take up alot of time and I am just hoping it works. So I thought I would run it past the pros to get some opinions.

Basically what I am doing is making a main sales letter selling the overall package as a whole and then instead of just listing the seperate packages and what they contain I am making another sales letter for each one. So it would look something like this

Main Heading
Main sales copy

package 1 Headline
Package 1 copy
Package 1 order button and closing

package 2 Headline
Package 2 copy
Package 2 order button and closing

package 3 Headline
Package 3 copy
Package 3 order button and closing

package 4 Headline
Package 4 copy
Package 4 order button and closing

package 5 Headline
Package 5 copy
Package 5 order button and closing

Closing statements for main sales copy
Signup to get a sample and put on autoresponder list
Special Price for all packages
Guarantee
Order buttton for all packages
Signature
Ps's

Well this is going to be a long sales letter as you can see. I just finished the copy for package 1. Just wondering if anyone has seen anything like this and if it worked. Or if you simply have any comments good or bad about this strategy.

Thanks in advance for all the help. I dont have any of what I am working on posted on the net but if you would like to see where I am thus far please PM me and I will get it up so you can see what I am talking about.

Thanks
Terry Brazil