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Default 05-11-2006, 07:01 PM

I don't know if it's your headline or not. But it should be rewritten anyway. It sucks and has a mistake (Unless you're from some country that speaks different english other than american english). It should be "A huge"... not "an huge..." I think. It also seems like you dropped headline capitalization when you got to the line "within hours of setup."

Not saying this is your problem, but it still should be fixed.
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