Hi Ken,

I agree with Jane, I have excellent vision, but I had to croon towards my monitor to read the yellow text.

The 3rd and 4th bullets felt too general (as if you ran out of steam while writing this) considering that the other 2 were detailed.

Typo in the bottom sentence:

"Get an the best of both worlds..."

I guess it should it be:

"Get the best of both worlds..." ?

Just saw another typo in the yellow text:

"Learn See..."

Started with a thought, and changed it midstream? I bet you have so much on your plate, that you didn't edit carefully?

I know that one...

Regarding the actual copy, I'm not a trader, so I hesitate to make strong suggestions - is "Samurai Trading", a well known phrase amongst traders?

If not, I would rethink your headline - if it is well known, how could you make it more specific with more detail? It felt a little too general to me, not exculsive enough.

I realize that you probably have to be very careful about your wording for legal reasons, but it lacks a unique, attention grabbing edge.

I don't dare offer suggestions, because again, I am unfamiliar with the trade.

Tante buone cose (All the best),

Tim